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Gravity Saved Me by ~Billy-X:iconBilly-X:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Old Poetry Structure > Emotional


I kept these pictures on my wall
Cause I kept hopin' that someday
They were just gonna fall,
And I could blame it all on gravity
Not me.

I know what it's like to feel alone,
Inside myself.
I'm pouring out my heart and soul
Into words that don't mean anything
To anyone but me.

I keep my heart on my shirtsleeve,
Cause I'm always hopin' that someday
You'll reach out to me
And we can blame my fall on gravity,
We can forget that it was me.

If I ever hurt you,
I never meant to
But I know these words mean nothing
To anyone but me,
Cause you won't see.

I took these pictures off my wall
Because they remind me of so long ago
And I kept hopin' that they'll fall,
So I could blame it all on gravity.
©2004-2009 ~Billy-X
:iconbilly-x:

Author's Comments

So, this is a rewrite of a poem I did a while ago. The original was called called Gravity, but this one is called Gravity Saved Me cause I did it... I took down the pictures.

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~snow-munkiie63 Apr 8, 2004, 11:25:25 PM
wow, that deserves another 'hoooooooooooooooly crap'

--
plaid skirts that hide scars walk in single file

so why not, why not taste the pain

I know what you're thinking, it must be caterpillar mating season
:icondashboardgrl18:
~DaShBoArDGrL18 Apr 9, 2004, 12:24:57 PM
i remember the original one of this poem, "gravity" it was great, and i could easily put myself in your situation. But this one I can also put myself in your situation .. thats how i feel with all my so called "friends" I know exactly how you feel. This is a great poem .. it's incredible. And i agree with snoe-munkiie63 .. it does deserve a 'hoooooooooooooooooooooly crap' :) this is awesome, keep it up hun! later babe-cait
:icongemini86:
~gemini86 Apr 9, 2004, 3:55:34 PM
:cries: sniff, reading poem on a day when you think of all the things in your life is the most amazing thing that can happen for no one can understand. Because you seem to take in the meaning of the poem more, and i got to say, this has made me think a bit more then I have before. I thank you for that:hug: because it has made an impact on my life.

--
Quote of the week:

A word is just a word until someone puts meaning into it~
:iconjadesongbird:
~jadesongbird Apr 9, 2004, 8:02:35 PM
I really like this. I feel the emotional undertone in this poem.

--
"An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind."- Gandhi
:iconbilly-x:
~Billy-X Apr 9, 2004, 9:25:19 PM
Thank you ^.^ XxBillyxX

--
The world doesn't need another love song, baby,
But I'm writing one for you.
-Just What The World Needs, Cheap Suits
:iconbilly-x:
~Billy-X Apr 9, 2004, 9:28:19 PM
Wow... *sniff* I feel so touched :cries: Thank you a billion. XxBillyxX

--
The world doesn't need another love song, baby,
But I'm writing one for you.
-Just What The World Needs, Cheap Suits
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